Sunday, October 24, 2010

Word #8

Word: plenum (noun)

Original sentence: "The Chinese Communist Party’s annual plenum, a chance for top officials across the country to hash out strategy, will meet from Oct. 15 to 18, according to a government statement on Tuesday." (from New York Times online article, "Talk of Reform to Enliven Leaders’ Meeting in China")

Merriam-Webster dictionary definition:
1 a : a space or all space every part of which is full of matter b : an air-filled space in a structure; especially : one that receives air from a blower for distribution (as in a ventilation system)
2: a general assembly of all members especially of a legislative body
3: the quality or state of being full 
 
My sentence:  "The universe is not a plenum."
 

Tuesday, October 19, 2010

NPR Radio Interview Analysis

bFresh Air interview of James Franco, by Terry Gross

For an entertainment interview, the interviewer, Gross, has quite a lot of subject material with which she needed to familiarize herself with prior to the interview. Franco is on the show to discuss two movies along with a collection of short stories. On all three topics, however, Gross demonstrates that she has done plenty of research.

Gross starts off the interview with some general questions about the subject of the first movie, Allen Ginsberg. This enables Franco to settle into the interview. From the inception of the interview Gross is successful in maintaining a cheery, conversational manner that also clearly helps to put Franco at ease. This results in him going into in-depth answers that reveal both interesting details and entertaining anecdotes. One example of this occurs when Gross asks Franco a question about a specific scene in the movie--again showing the benefits of research--which leads to an enjoyable story about how Franco "amputated" his arm for the second movie under discussion.

When the conversation moves to the subject of Franco's book of short stories, Gross picks out a specific passage that she utilizes to get an insight into his life. Juxtaposing the subject in the story with Franco's own life proves an adept strategy in getting him to reveal aspects of his own approach to his art.

By this stage of the interview, Gross has built-up a good rapport with Franco and the interview develops an almost conversational tone, which enables a free flowing of thoughts from both sides. Gross is not afraid to interrupt Franco's responses when an interesting topic arises. Such is the case when Franco casually states that he has an addictive personality. This is clearly something listeners will be interested in hearing more detail about and, without awkwardness, Gross duly and immediately intercedes to inquire further into this comment.

The hospitable tone that has been established throughout the interview helps to prevent any uneasiness when Franco fails to comprehend one of Gross' questions. The interviewer simply brushes this off and calmly restates her question in a more easily-understood way.

This is very close to being a textbook interview. Although she is helped by Franco's welcoming manner and well-thought-out responses, Gross did extensive research into her subject and also demonstrates excellent interview skills. What I take out of this that can aid my own interview skills is the benefits of being completely at ease with your interviewee to establish a good rapport. This then helps enable you to have the confidence to ask the subject potentially challenging questions, even interrupting them, all the while in a conversational, but still professional, way.

Edit the World #2

1. From the Guardian online, http://www.guardian.co.uk/football/2010/oct/18/gordon-strachan-middlesbrough
"On Saturday lost 2-1 at home to Leeds United, with the Riverside Stadium – where crowds have dwindled alarmingly – echoing to chants of "We want Gordon Strachan out"."
 
Word missing between "on" and "Saturday."


2. From Metro San Jose online, http://www.metroactive.com/movies/enter-the-void.html
"The toy set is startling to those who know NoƩ's works of hardened misanthropy like I Stand Alone or the backward-day rape/revenge opus Irreversible."

"Irreversible," a movie title, should be italicized.

3. From same article as no. 2
"Oscar sees a kind of heaven like glowing Chihuly blown-glass tendrils issuing from the light fixtures." 

"heaven like," should be hyphenated as it modifies "glowing."

4. From Metro San Jose online, http://www.metroactive.com/movies/social-network.html
"This is one mere touch of the taste and intelligence of Fincher regular cinematographer Jeff Cronenweth..."

Should be "Fincher's regular cinematographer."

5. From Metro San Jose online, http://www.sanjose.com/uk-subs-and-total-chaos-e1027571
"Most American kids never even got to hear these second-tier punkers until compilations like Punk and Disorderly made it over here."

As it is an album title, "Punk and Disorderly," should be italicized.

Wednesday, October 13, 2010

Word #7

Word: heedlessly (adverb)

Original sentence: "The mission is not yet accomplished; the rig is improvised, the path is crooked, and it's too soon to completely, heedlessly celebrate." (From The New Yorker online article: Close Read: Chile's First Astronaut"

Merriam Webster dictionary definition: (for heedless) "not taking heed : inconsiderate, thoughtless"

My sentence: Sarah's friend acted heedlessly when setting her up on a blind date just hours after she had been dumped by her boyfriend."

Sunday, October 10, 2010

Mystery Character


Taking to the stage, customarily late and with fans baying for both blood and bass, it’s clear that though age has caught up to him and his bandmates may have changed, some things never do. In his familiar tight lycra shorts and ever-present bandanna, covering his now-dreadlocked hair, it is obvious from the first high-pitched scream that he still has the crowd in the palm of his hands.  

Wednesday, October 6, 2010

What Makes It News


The story I picked is one that I saw on the New York Times Web site a couple of days ago about some U.S. states now allowing people to bring guns into bars and restaurants. One of the primary reasons that this story is newsworthy is that it contains a large degree of conflict. Guns and their legality to be possessed and carried is a subject that people feel very strongly about on both sides of the debate. There is also an element of currency in this story that adds to its news value. The subject of gun rights has been in the news fairly recently with two Supreme Court rulings on the issue, and this story is the latest development.

In order to localize this story for a Bay Area newspaper, it would be a good idea to include some details about the current gun laws in California. In addition, some information detailing the number of gun permit holders in the particular area where the newspaper is published would also help to make the story more pertinent for the readership. Finally, including in the article any recent news items from the local area on the subject of gun ownership or gun crime would also give the article a higher proximity value.

Word #6

Word: libidinal (adjective)

Original sentence: "Boys do not scream, so we get threatened by all this libidinal energy." (From the book Talking to Girls About Duran Duran by Rob Sheffield.)


Merriam-Webster dictionary definition: "of or relating to the libido"


My sentence: As Jeremy watched the new Angelina Jolie movie, he was filled with libidinal desires."